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Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: KY
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A Poem
Torn
The barrier burst wide open Water ruining the carpet Of a downstairs basement Left to the pity of Snarling rats Protection from bitterness And enemies closer than friends They smother me With this love breaking point Pain meeting pleasure in a crazy ordeal A rite of passage Tucked away into the depths Of the sullen sky Where my head hangs listlessly Fog engulfs me Blurring my vision With teakettle melancholy Of a scalding (Oh so hot) Hand against my throat A burning sensation Fire in my neck An illusion of warmth That only makes the body Liquid in form But cold to the touch Bringing out the closet Of masochist toys And Riviera fantasies In the sprinkling rain Leaking drops Of a pink pleasure cloud From the mind Down the spine Into the fingertips Of my innocent touch It is you alone that saves me Leaving your name On my swollen heart In kid-crafted letters of love A touch so demanding Yet asking slowly if you can You persist And I fail to remember How my mother warned me That the perils of men With original sin And too much testosterone Could steal me away I miss how well I used to be able to write. I really do. |
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Free Thinker
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Australia
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Re: A Poem
nice...
but whats teakettle? ![]()
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Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: janesville
Posts: 323
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Re: A Poem
interesting read... i like it...
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cure.the.pain-before.i.go.insaine-screaming.out. in.vain-gripping.both.sides.of.my.head.the.same. simply.waiting.for.the.rain-then.the.pot.came- so.my.mind.may.remain-a.lil.sane brokenkeyboard. |
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