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    So, I get bored

    I don't normally write poetry, mostly because I ahve a hard time keeping the beat and syllable count straight. But sometimes I pull one off. I wrote this on the spot, actually a few minutes ago to be precise.

    Electric signs buzzing my brain,
    Things going too fast to care for,
    The rentacop with matching stick,
    Even the Doctor does not know.

    I see you walking to my car,
    Tapping on my window like hell.
    You say "come out here right now son.
    I just wanna speak to you please."

    I knew you were stroking your piece.
    I the marrionette complied,
    Allowing you to pull my strings.
    "But what is this bag doing here?"

    Should I stay or should I just go,
    Leave the broadway musical show.
    Or should I be cracked wide open,
    Should I feel happy to be smashed?

    You take me to your robot farm,
    You plug me in like a machine,
    You zap me with your feel good blues,
    Then, "Goodbye we'll be seeing you."

    I walk down the street feeling sane,
    My two eyes are plus a rose tint.
    I'm the wind up doll marching straight,
    With a twisted smile on my face.

    The faces on the crowded street,
    The sounds of people laughing hard,
    The world that spun a little fast,
    But all within me is broken.

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    That is sweet man.

    EDIT: hahaha man I am such a liar... I didnt even read your poem... im Sorry... im too stoned to read that much... haha its makin me laugh though becuase im so stupid... sorry though
    Last edited by yeahh; 12-19-2003 at 10:12 PM.

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    I read it now. That is cool. Its about you smokin in your car and a cop catches you. See I told you I read it