Best friend

[doobien]

pot

At times my only freind.
Never has she lied to me or caused me pain.
Made naturally by a god
Though proclaimed to be the devils lair.
Reality is the gate way that leads to drugs.
Look within yourself and your failures.
Only from falling from grace can we make rational desions.
Pot will allways be there for me in sustance.
Your words will change with the atitudes warranted.
Let me be I just wanta relax and smoke some
POT

better

 

[ThaRanger21]

poem

that poem was dumb....

 

[eppy_]

that poem was dumb....

Same thing I was thinking...

 

[Detained]

I'm not a poem expert, but what form of poetry is that? good messege, but lacks a little flow.

EDIT: BTW I reread my post and it sounds like I'm just hating, but seriously only meant as constructive critisism.

 

[Darkshade1980]

Re: Best freind

how do you post your own Thread or make your own discussion?