Hows That For Ironic

Tyler J

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Last year during school i didnt see the reason in writing pointless essays about meaningless topics. So i decided not to do them, so i failed. Ill admit it was a dumb move but in summer school we were required to write a poem about what happens to you after you die... so i got stoned, and wrote a kick ass poem and its now being published on the front page of the New Hampshire Literary Magazine or somethin like that, any way here it is...

Open Your Eyes



Open your eyes for the first time

For the last time

As the ground starts to fade

A sea of darkness fulfills your vision

And in the distance is a light that draws near

As you approach the florescent, your senses dissipate

All that exists is the light and you, nothing else

Nor hot, nor cold, nor wet, nor dry, nor silence, nor noise

Just light

When all darkness has been removed, an ocean full of noise suddenly surrounds you, wrapping you in sound

The noise slowly transforms into an elaborate orchestra of the senses

And the conductor is a man called death



You look at your limbs and realize they've left you

Instead wings have sprouted from your shoulders

And feathers flow throughout your body

You soar through the sky

Not stopping or slowing for anyone but your self

You are free
 
Awsome, Thanks Man.
 
Congrats man! You should keep writing poetry, you have a knack for it. And if you do, post it here for all us poetic stoners to read!
 
Agreed, painted a lush picture...
 
gj man keep tokin and writin
 
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