Scrog gone wrong

[MrHPotter]

I think this scrog hasn’t gone 100% correct but it was near enough right, I think I know what went wrong but am wondering if you have any suggestions for next time?

 

[MickFoster]

What are your concerns?

 

[gr865]

Please take the pics with lights off, hard to see if there are problems.
As Mick said what do you want to know about?